Lucia de'Medici ([info]luciademedici) wrote,
@ 2005-10-13 15:13:00
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Entry tags:fanfiction: darkfic, fanfiction: slash, harry potter: draco/viktor

For [info]storyteller: Death Eater: Third Circle Initiation (Draco/Viktor)

Title: Death Eater: Third Circle Initiation
Prompt: For [info]storyteller, who wanted Draco/Viktor – ice.
Pairing: Draco/Viktor
Warnings: Necro blow job? Cannibalism? I think this is the nastiest thing I’ve ever written. I feel dirty.
Rating: NC-17
Notes: I swear I was going to do something clean, originally; involving ice-skating on the Hogwarts Lake. But no, I’m in far too pissy a mood to do anything sweet.

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Death Eater: Third Circle Initiation
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Draco dips his head, placing both chilled, bone-thin hands on either gelid thigh, and only wonders for a moment if this is at all sanitary.

Viktor’s cold, but that’s to be expected. The surprise comes in the fact that the naked cadaver – dispossessed of identity save for the hooked nose, furrowed eyebrows, and cataract-covered eyes – is surprisingly firm beneath his touch.

He licks his lips and contemplates if wearing gloves would warm the chill seeping from Viktor’s thighs to his hands. Really, he just wants to wear the damned things to prevent the leaping, exuberant micro-organisms from flinging themselves from the corpse to his robes.

Merlin, if death were contagious!

He hesitates again, fighting a rising gorge while inspecting the blue-grey tinge of Viktor’s flesh. The dark thatch of pubic hair nestling an ironically firm, frozen cock does nothing to quell his revulsion at his task.

At least at these temperatures there’s no stench.

Behind him, shaded by a copse of arching pines, Zabini ‘tuh’s’ impatiently.

It’s just the frost covering the hair, he assures himself. No mould or fungus – white-capped and festering. Just frost.

He leans in and flicks his tongue reluctantly against the purpled glans and draws back quickly.

Salt and cold. Draco grimaces in distaste, but returns a little more confidently for a second swipe with his mouth. He expected something much more foul-tasting than the frozen, oddly-flavoured popsicle presented to him.

Gingerly, he slides the organ further into his mouth, and waits for it to warm just enough so that he can sink his teeth in.

He gnaws a bit at first, softening the edges with his incisors. Copper mixes with the taste – a dulled, muted metallic flavour that doesn’t fill his mouth as he expected. Instead, boldly, his lips numb with the effort, he bites down and the appendage tears from its owner roughly.

“It’s about goddamned time, too,” Zabini huffs from behind him. “Let’s get on with it, its bloody freezing out here.” He sniffs and turns on his heel, boots crunching rapidly through the snow as he pulls his furs around him against the cold.

They’ll be waiting for him back at the manor house.

Dully, Draco spits the member back out onto the snow.

It needs ketchup, he thinks without humour, and stands on shaking feet to return for the last and final part of his initiation...

Dinner.




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[info]vexia
2005-10-13 07:42 pm UTC (link)
Well, that certainly made my blood curl in a delightfully disturbing way.

Fantastic work, as usual.

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[info]luciademedici
2005-10-13 07:43 pm UTC (link)
*makes crunching noises*

s'fucking nasty.

i need a shower now.

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[info]foofee25
2005-10-13 08:30 pm UTC (link)
Your icon has a whole new meaning now.

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[info]luciademedici
2005-10-13 08:33 pm UTC (link)
*cackles* OMG I so didn't see that. [info]vexia that slays me.

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[info]elanor_sarah
2005-10-13 08:27 pm UTC (link)
It did not read that. The summary made me run to high hell and back again.

Why can you not write a fluffy bunny crackfic?

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[info]luciademedici
2005-10-13 08:34 pm UTC (link)
Did you request a drabble originally? I can try, meng, but I make no promises.

The original post was here: http://www.livejournal.com/users/dimedici/95606.html

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[info]elanor_sarah
2005-10-13 08:40 pm UTC (link)
THERE WAS A REQUEST POST? *faints* oh you are SO getting you're ass whipped by a the fluffy plot bunney of DOOM. (If I was really ebil I'd give you H/G)

-Ellie
(who has 'the power')

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[info]luciademedici
2005-10-13 08:41 pm UTC (link)
NO WEASLEYS. Gaddamn. At least not RON because that'll end up being a deathfic forsure.

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[info]elanor_sarah
2005-10-13 08:42 pm UTC (link)
you keep killing my Ronny off! STOP IT. I REQUESTED RON.

KEEP HIM ALIVE!

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[info]luciademedici
2005-10-13 08:46 pm UTC (link)
*grumbles*

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[info]elanor_sarah
2005-10-13 09:05 pm UTC (link)
pleassssseeeee for me. I will drabble in return. Please let it be crackfic or gen shaped. You don't really go for romance and my darkfic does not reach your meticulous standards.

You haven't read my crackfic which won me a years paid LJ. I read SS for you 3 effing hours. I think you can deal with 2,000 words. *leers* *sporks*

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[info]foofee25
2005-10-13 09:17 pm UTC (link)
You read all of it? In one sitting? Intense. I think I may have done the first three, but damn. That is one hefty dose of darkfic. Though I suppose the last bit does help wash it down.

The Zabini Family. Does the body good.

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[info]elanor_sarah
2005-10-13 09:21 pm UTC (link)
I've been saying to Kira for nigh on a year "I will read it, I will read it" and she kept saying "It'll corrupt you, don't read it, don't read it." In a comment a month or so ago she told me to read it, resigned to the fact I was already corrupted. So I did.

I am a borderline darkfic fan, more of an appreciater of the finer points but not big into the genra.

But hotdamn. I am hooked.

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[info]foofee25
2005-10-13 08:32 pm UTC (link)
That ain't right. Icon!Viktor is disturbed.

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[info]luciademedici
2005-10-13 08:35 pm UTC (link)
(Somewhere in the wings Malfoy is sorting through condiments)

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[info]foofee25
2005-10-13 09:13 pm UTC (link)
(And Viktor makes sure his Quidditch cup is securely fastened)

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[info]penyn_1600
2005-10-13 09:08 pm UTC (link)
wow...that was really gross, in an excellently written way. Was Draco doing that for a dare?

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[info]luciademedici
2005-10-13 09:10 pm UTC (link)
The title is "Death Eater: Third Circle Initiation."

It's a play on the words - since the action and the comment about ketchup suggests that by being a Death Eater there is an ordeal that needs to be faced - literally, eating the dead (cannibalism).

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[info]penyn_1600
2005-10-13 09:17 pm UTC (link)
ah. Cool. I should start paying attention to titles.

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[info]shmanet_janet
2005-10-13 11:53 pm UTC (link)
*snort*

is it wrong that i am completely amused?

awesome as usual.
overall, very disgusting:)

i love it.

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[info]luciademedici
2005-10-14 02:40 am UTC (link)
If you're amused and that makes you wacko, I must be totally off the edge because I really enjoyed writing this. Or at least - the sparse humour was fun.

Popsicle man.

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[info]storyteller
2005-10-14 06:40 am UTC (link)
!!!

Why did I not see this earlier??

This is .... wrong .... and yet -- I can't look away. Hahahha, I love how you took my prompt though.

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[info]luciademedici
2005-10-14 05:02 pm UTC (link)
I wanted to do an ice cube bit, originally. Glad this goes over well, anyhow. ;)

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[info]retro_radiostar
2005-12-28 02:21 am UTC (link)
I'm not sure if I should laugh or hurl. What in God's name made you write that? I give you props for originality - but I take them away for freaking me out so much. But I give one back for originality again.

Kudos: 1

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[info]luciademedici
2005-12-28 02:24 am UTC (link)
Admit it, everyone has a secret lust for the forbidden. ;)

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[info]dreambastion
2007-06-19 04:49 pm UTC (link)
I have duel reactions on that one - *bleargh* and Oh, wow! Deliciously dark and disturbing - just what I expect from you :)

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